Stance'd Bmw 330i

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Stance'd Bmw 330i

Postby Figge_stunter » Wed Jul 11, 2012 7:45 pm

Hi!
Again, a BMW, but this time there was a E90 330i...
Hope you will like it! :)

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Re: Stance'd Bmw 330i

Postby MA.Developments » Thu Jul 12, 2012 1:02 pm

I like this but the rear arch doesn't quite look right and i don't no why!!! anyway great wheels an stance and another great background from you, keep them coming :)

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Re: Stance'd Bmw 330i

Postby Figge_stunter » Thu Jul 12, 2012 4:12 pm

MA.Developments wrote:I like this but the rear arch doesn't quite look right and i don't no why!!! anyway great wheels an stance and another great background from you, keep them coming :)

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Do you mean the light / shadows, or the body itself looks odd?
Because I can imagine that you're referring to that I made ​​it to the coupe instead of the 5 doors!? :P

Then I have to complain about myself, left light looks odd, especially with the lights on!
The air intake on the side should have highlights on the edges and some other mistakes I could have done better :P

But thanks so much for the criticism, really appreciate them comments I receive, and of course it is fun with good reviews too! :D

Btw, But thanks so much for the criticism, really appreciate them comments I receive, and of course it is fun with good reviews too! :)
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Re: Stance'd Bmw 330i

Postby zzd4nzz » Thu Jul 12, 2012 8:40 pm

I think the rear arch looks weird because of that side vent. It doesn't really flow with the front vents. I think it would look much better if you rounded the corners of the vents!

Other than that, very nice! Chops are getting cleaner! :D
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Re: Stance'd Bmw 330i

Postby Figge_stunter » Fri Jul 13, 2012 12:11 pm

zzd4nzz wrote:I think the rear arch looks weird because of that side vent. It doesn't really flow with the front vents. I think it would look much better if you rounded the corners of the vents!

Other than that, very nice! Chops are getting cleaner! :D


Yeah I agree with you! But i trying to learn som beginners-stuff right now, like airvents and sutch of things :P
But i appriciate that you say what you think! :)

(No Google-translate this time, therefore the baaa....d english!) :worm:
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Re: Stance'd Bmw 330i

Postby DragonForce » Mon Jul 16, 2012 5:41 am

Good work, this is considered almost extreme stylign in these days 8) Like guys mentioned, rear wheel seems a bit too small, since you lowered the car quite a bit, you went 2low :D

The background doesn't fit 100 %, since is a bit more tilted then a car, but like you said, it's all begginers errors that can be easily learned with some practice and looking at other peoples chop's. :)
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Re: Stance'd Bmw 330i

Postby illusionest » Sun Sep 02, 2012 12:25 am

Great background change! Not much to say besides the work is cleanly done and the modifications are nice.
I'd suggest adding brighter colors or adding more "whites". Try playing around with the levels, curves, brightness / contrast ;)

Good stuff!
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